Great Creator - ~ Plot summary (full book spoiler, watch carefully)

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Be cautiously warned, this book has a big foreshadowing and is supported by suspense. If you read this article before reading the complete book, it will seriously damage the reading experience.

   Don't read this chapter until you finish reading the whole book!

   Don't read this chapter until you finish reading the whole book!

   Don't read this chapter until you finish reading the whole book!

   If you look at the summary of the plot without reading the book, you won’t understand what the book says. Because I am based on the "read the book" readers to summarize.

   Friends who are interested in the conclusion of the testimonials before reading the book can move to the "Ending Testimonials" section next door. No spoilers over there.

   This chapter is neither the main text of the novel nor the extravaganza. There is no specific plot. It is basically a testimonial, and the content is terrible. Please read it with a relaxed and happy mood.

   Then I will start.

   When the book was first written, there was no outline.

   When it was about 100,000 characters, it was time for me to send the contract to the starting point, and I quickly compiled an outline to fill in.

  Well, I happily write according to my reading interests, where I write, and I have a general idea of ​​how to develop in the future.

The idea of ​​   was originally two key points.

  One, "3D printed objects out of thin air. Because I was too idle, I made a computer and designed some artificial intelligence to play with myself.".

  Second, "I couldn't go out in the early stage, but later I went out to meet the indigenous humans and became their guide."

   Then I connected these two key points to make artificial intelligence a native god.

   The original idea was formed like this.

   I mentioned a few thoughts in the S1 web essay group, and I started writing it the next day.

   After adding branches, leaves and flesh and blood, the story gradually becomes fuller. I am writing and changing the settings in the middle, perfecting the details, and adding new elements.

   I have only written short and short stories before. It is the first time for such a long story. The way I can think of is to add small stories to the main line and string them together like grapes.

  Before writing each short story, sometimes I just suddenly feel a vague feeling that I want to write such a story. I just wrote it without any specific plan.

   I don’t plan too much in advance. In many cases, I just sit in front of the keyboard and the story naturally flows from under my hands.

   But I found out later that I really have to plan ahead.

   Otherwise, some of the stories really deviate from the main line, and they are so fascinated to death.

   Let's talk about the first story first, which is the plot in the dark.

That paragraph is actually the most mindless. I wrote it completely instinctively. It is a reflection of my personal experience. For example, I was watching a tutorial on mind mapping recently and I wrote it easily. Schedule planning, diary , It's all what I usually do. And I'm still taking IELTS...

  Depression and the like, many people say that it is true, and some even ask me if I have had depression.

To be honest, there was a period of time when I was really in a bad state of mind and I still couldn't sleep well. So I found a depression scale and did it. I found that I was healthy and there was no problem at all, so I checked the depression myself. The relevant medical knowledge, it suddenly became clear that I was still a thousand miles away from being sick, and there was no need to go online with real patients. Later, I saw a lot of real depression patients in S1 and learned about their situation. When I wrote it at the end, it seemed real.

As for the protagonist’s state of immersing his head and rushing forward, I have a deep understanding of it, because my character is that if I want to do something and want to do it well, I can concentrate on doing one thing in a day. a couple of hours. Of course, if you are studying, you will be tired. If you are reading or writing novels and essays, you will not be tired. I have tried writing novels at 5:00 in the morning, keeping the speed of 2,000 words per hour, and writing until 9:30 in the evening, without fatigue. Feel. As long as I have motivation, goals, and no interference from others, then I can eliminate all difficulties and do it to the end. Take writing novels as an example. I know that for many authors, writing 4000 a day is a pain. I didn't write much at first. Later I found that others can do it every day, so I try to see if I can do this. At first, I was very tired. Every day, I feel dizzy and lie down the next day. But I was not discouraged. I continued to try. After I practiced, the brain structure gradually adapted to this high-intensity and high-stress state. The last 200,000 words of this book were written by me over half a month during the winter vacation. Write more than 10,000 characters, every day, the highest day I wrote 22,000. In fact, I broke my leg on January 22 and went to the hospital for a film. I had to walk on crutches. But even so, I still wrote ten thousand words on the bed.

If you find it difficult to stick to one thing, you can try this. Just add weight to yourself and push yourself to the brink of collapse. You will find that your mind and brain are really a kind of flexible thing, and you can press it anyway. , Don’t even think about persistence, perseverance, plans and the like. Get up every morning, automatically and consciously take your words, professional books, novels or essays to be written, etc., to your side, and start to slap, That's it. If you find it hard, take the initiative to find fun. For example, when I recite words, I use APP to recite. Scallops, Momo, etc., like games, can continue to challenge, allowing me to recite 500 words a day. The same is true for reading professional books. I think they are pretty good-looking. If they are not good-looking, it must be that they are not well written, so read another one. If you find fun, you can spend more than ten hours a day until you fall into bed at 10 o'clock in the evening, and get up the next day and continue to spend the day.

   At first, you will feel so tired and dying. But you will adapt slowly, just like in the novel. After getting through the most difficult point, you will feel relaxed later on. The human brain is adaptable. Doing a lot of things over a long period of time can make people feel better. The efficiency is getting higher and higher, and the resistance to pressure is getting stronger and stronger.

   I used to take classes at New Oriental, and I quite liked Yu Minhong’s inspirational quotes, looking for hope in despair. In fact, with more life experience, you will know that many times you can't see hope at all, and your whole person lives in despair. What should I do? In fact, it is to accept despair, do not care about despair, what should you do in normal times, do what you need to survive (work, finish school, etc.), and do things that you both like and help yourself at other times.

   Anyway, despair is to do the same thing, and hope is to do the same thing. So what does it matter whether it is despair or hope? In fact, sometimes people just don't want to be too sensitive and delicate. It's better to be a single-celled creature with thick nerves.

   The main storyline will not be repeated, and I will talk about various short stories.

   When writing a short story, I usually silently set the theme of the short story itself. This theme is the purpose of my writing this short story.

   The first one is the story of Kuroko. The theme of this story is "religion", and the smuggled goods are of course copied from old horses. By the way, I wrote about the cruel primitive society. I used to read novels and found that people often wrote primitive society very beautifully. In fact, of course it is impossible to be so beautiful. It will definitely be very cruel.

   The part of primitive society, I prepared a lot in the early stage, and I did not prepare it specifically for this book, but I usually read some books on biology and humanities and history, so I understand it better. When I entered the feudal society, my shortcomings became apparent. I needed too much material, and I read too little. I didn't even read the popular book Yi Zhongtian Chinese History (cover my face), and only read the first 7 books. So from the beginning of Lu Cuo's story, it seems fake....

   There are also Shuzi and Xiaohua in this story. Xiaohua has also become an important female supporting role in the later period. But in the first story, Heizi is the core. He is the promoter of the whole story and a unique individual, selfish, insidious, ambitious, and thinking beyond the times. It's a pity, 200 catties of interesting soul, in the end he also got the ending that a villain should have.

   The second story is about dragon and water control, the establishment of the country. The theme of this story is "sacrifice dedication", or dedication for the collective. The core is Cao Jiu. His character is consistent throughout the story. When he was a young orphan, he could give his life to save the meager hope of the villagers. After he finally established his immortal achievements and became the king of the human race, he still did not forget his original intention and was willing to use his life to repay the human race's faults. Of course, my performance seems to be a bit problematic, so much controversy.

   The third story is a famous general who is stationed at the border. The theme of this story is "country". It is actually a feudal country (but the era I wrote is not a feudal era). The core character is Lu Cuo. The story of Chao Cuo in the Han Dynasty is directly applied to the name, from the monarch to This is true for treacherous ministers, but the content borrows some common phenomena in history.

   The protagonist's words and deeds in this story are simply too trolls, but in fact he is just arrogant.

From this story, I roughly determined the direction of the short story in the future... The wrong is the world, the tragedy of inevitability, the deepest despair, the most painful comprehension, the power beyond the mundane, breaking the rules of the world, the fire of life is in **** Burning, the protagonist is on the bank of the long river of time, observing the flow of the entire river, and occasionally intervenes.

   And, even in the darkest plot, there are occasional laughs. It's not so much that I deliberately laughed, as I can't avoid the laughter in my novels. Because my laugh point is really too low, I often write and write that there can be a laugh point here, so I wrote it, while writing about myself hahahahahahaha. This is the daily life of people with low laugh points.... As for the problem of laughter destroying the sense of tragedy, I am learning to solve it.

   The fourth story, the story of the academy. Everyone should have noticed that Ge She's prototype here is Confucius, but it is not entirely true. It should be the part where Confucius compiles history books, teaches students, and organizes ancient rituals, but there is no Confucianism. So in the end, Ge She did not complete Huang Si's original vision.

   There is a branch in this story, which is completely fairy tale, and finally becomes full of adult distortions, which is really inappropriate. I can only say that this cat will pay attention to it in the future, meow!

  The theme of the fourth story is "education". Whether it is Geshe's side or the finale's side, it is all around the theme of education. The last pretense is just by the way.

   I think education can solve many problems, but people who can be educated and an environment where they can be educated are needed. For more information, please refer to some relevant researches on education support of the United Nations. Facts have proved that if people are not made aware of the important role of education, they will rarely take the initiative to receive education, even if they have school, they will not study hard. The tragic experience of the female partner inside is about this situation.

   There are some transitional chapters in the middle. Actually I shouldn't write about transitions, transitions are really watery.

   The fifth story, the story of Zhu Yao-Wen Ling. The theme of this story is "Truth." Zhu Yao's prototype is Lao Tzu, but it is not completely written in accordance with historical figures. I still add factors that I like. To be honest, this story is extremely boring. It is because of this story that later I learned to avoid boredom.

   It’s not good to go too far ahead of the theme.

   In the sixth story, Huang Si takes Kongyu out to play. The theme of this story is "chivalry". Because we are about to enter the era of martial arts, this story is the beginning. In fact, many times I write the plot around the setting, which is not a good habit, but since I am having fun with the setting in this book, I decided to fix this problem in the next book.

By the way, the writing of the story of Kong Yu was also a turning point for me to completely solve the problem of being unable to sleep because of Calvin. Because I figured it out, writing my favorite characters and favorite plots, why do I have to abuse myself to fiddle with the previous one? What about the boring and difficult content of the story? Just relax. And because I am lo*ic*n...so there is a cute little sky rain.

   However, the supporting role seems to be a bit flat and not realistic enough. This, to be honest, is mainly because I have changed the plot too many times. I completely forgot how to write it later... the hard plot began.

   The sixth story, the story of Firefox. A very small story, told in an overview. The theme of Modder is mainly to satirize cross-racial love.

   The seventh story, Zhou Xia’s story. This story is relatively large, and it is also the first time I have planned to write the plot longer and more twists and turns. Zhou Xia’s prototype is Zhuangzi, and of course my personal interests have been added. From the very beginning, I declared in the group that I would write the Sword Fairy Girl, and I would let her die several times in order to conform to the book "Zhuangzi". The content—especially in line with the content of Lu Xun’s short story "Rise to Death". In the end, because it was so miserable, she only died once. It's just this time that readers protested, eh. So I learned, don't kill the innocent, cute, brave and upright beautiful girl casually. The reason why the plot seems a bit wrong is really because I decided to let her die once from the beginning, and forced the plot to the past...

   The theme of this story is "Death can't obliterate obsession", or simply "freedom".

   Is Zhou Xia finally free? Of course. Because Huang Si didn't bother to care about her. She is also a great hero and has privileges. Among the Three Realms and the world, she can't go anywhere except the Demon Realm.

   The eighth story, the story of a historian. This story is not long, and it appears as a turning point in the middle of two big scrolls. However, this is a story I like very much. The theme of this story is "Historical Perspective". People with different amounts of information see history in different ways.

   There is a little ending to the story of Wen Ling and Zhou Xia behind the historian's story, just to give them an ending. At the same time, it brings out the skill of Quantitative Eye.

  Behind is Beixuan's personal return. Beixuan has never had a sense of existence before. In fact, I have decided on his role a long time ago. He is a mid-to-late role and a natural leader.

   Still following the main line, Gu Yan talks about the affairs of higher life. In fact, the story of higher life is the biggest foreshadowing behind the plot of this book. Of course, the process of the two secret realms here is too watery.

   Then there was another main thread of water failure, about the management of the Three Realms.

   Next is the main line of the balancer. The main line of the mission system.

   The ninth story, the story of the real martial arts society, I planned for a long time, trying to write a three-line parallel plot. I feel pretty good after writing it out. At this time, I feel that the protagonist is too versatile, thrown into the world to seriously disrupt the balance, and restrict him a bit, so that he can only do some limited things. In this way, he can live on earth in the same way as a mortal. The three lines of this story, the lines of Huang Si and Millet are bright and warm, so they merged in the mid-term, and the lines of Song Hong and Xiao Qiu were too miserable, so they merged at the latest. The core characters of this story are Guan Meng, Song Hong, and Xiao Qiu. Guan Meng’s personality is slightly complicated. On the one hand, she has a steadfast faith, but on the other hand, her faith is too pure and can’t stand the test. . Guan Meng is pretty cute to me, so her plot is more funny.

   Xiaoqiu, it's too miserable, all kinds of miserables, more and more miserable. However, only Xiaoqiu's plot reveals the nature of this novel as a science fiction... In normal martial arts novels, eating the natural treasures will not cause acute radiation sickness. Xiaoqiu's story has traces of the Five Star Story Ao Ke Suo, but it is estimated that not many people know about it, after all, it has been an old comic for so many years.

   Song Hong is not worth mentioning, he doesn't like this kind of man very much. Xiao Qiu had nothing to do with it, the nestling complex, the suspension bridge effect. Except for Xiao Qiu, I thought that no woman would like him. Zhou Xia didn't take him seriously either, giving him the skill is to let him take care of other people, especially Millet.

   Lu Cheng, Guan Ming, these two male pairs actually I really like them. One is a big boss, who looks stupid, but is actually quite capable, and the other is an old fried dough stick.

   The theme of this story is... Forget it, there is no theme. If I really want to say, I'm afraid you will beat me, because my idea is too troll to express the contrast of the three lines. Song Hongxiaoqiu is a romantic plot, and the final ending of Mishui is funny, but Huang Siguanmeng has a theme, that is, faith. It was really unlucky to see a **** like Huang Si, Guan Meng.

After    is a bunch of main lines.

   The tenth story, this is the follow-up plot of Guan Meng, but this is an independent story with a theme.

   The theme of this story is "faith". The source of this theme is the branch plot of the seventh epic of the mobile game "Mourning Essay". Of course, I did not learn from the plot itself, but only borrowed from the different views of human belief in gods. Believe in the gods wholeheartedly and entrust your destiny to the hands of the gods you believe in; or do you think that the gods are not necessarily reliable and are determined to create the road by your own hands? Whether it is in the game or in my novel, the correct path is actually the former, but if it were you and me, how would you choose? Can we really stick to our faith without reservation, and surrender our destiny to the unfathomable gods? Of course not, not really. Therefore, whether it is Guan Meng's brother leaving the gods to survive alone, or the actions of the villains in the seventh epic "Mourning Essay", in my opinion, they are all understandable. This creates a contradiction.

   However, in literary works, everything depends on the setting of the world. The world is set with a true god, and the true **** cares for the world. The former is the correct approach, and the latter automatically becomes the villain.

   After the main line, ambush pen. Lighthouse, balancer.

   The eleventh story, the end of the war between the heavens and the devil. I didn't write the specific Thousand-Year War carefully. In fact, I could write it carefully, but at that time, I was too busy. In fact, the story of martial arts is the one I have prepared and written the most carefully. But then there are exams, school chores, and so on. I don't have the time and energy to prepare the plot carefully. I am not very good at wars and battles. At that time, both my mother and the tutor were urging me to finish as soon as possible, and I had to hurry up to do academic work... So in fact, since the Thousand-Year War, I have been catching up with the plot for a long time, and occasionally stop to write a short story.

   The core character of this story is the son of the pitted mother, and Kong Yu. Kong Yu is so cute. This story is very short. The previous blockbuster movies have nothing to do with conflicts. They are all about the celestial world. So, writing stories around the setting is like this... It really shouldn't.

   The theme of this story is "Hate".

   Then is the story of the protagonist being a troll on the forum.

The stalks played here are all Chuanhuang stalks, including all kinds of speech that Chuanhuang usually likes to say. For example, there is no freedom of speech in the United States, MAGA, and even Chuanhuang’s Twitter was banned, and the Twitter fire secretary of state incident was also carried by me. Once again, it can be seen that I am Chuanhuang's true love (black) fan. My first book, you can play it as you want. I won’t play around in the next book... I feel that it’s easy to 404 if I play too much.

   Then Bei Xuan personally returned. No subject.

   The twelfth story, a nautical story, the core character is Gu Jing. The theme probably doesn't exist, but the main reason is to write about the progress of human science and technology.

   Huang Si is really a foodie. So that a bunch of oysters can die and come back to life.

   is then the main line of the spiritual world, entering the age of fairy tales. Because the reference materials I read before were not with me, Xianxia assumed that I was tinkering with it by myself.

   The thirteenth story, the story of Dragon Ball and the doctor. The core figure is peace, and the theme is "people". Contains elements of peasant uprising, religion, medicine, fairy tales and so on. It says that I want to be in a hurry again, so the rest is a bit brief. By the way, the previous plot was borrowed from "The Legend of the Eight Immortals", and I didn't even change the name Pinghe. It's just that the plot and settings have been changed a lot by me. Because I think the original plot makes people feel very shit.

In "The Legend of the Eight Immortals", Ping He ate the dragon pill and turned it into a dragon. In order to prevent this from happening (the thing is a divine weapon, it is not a real dragon pill). The bead is made a circle larger than the human throat, and no one can eat it anymore!

   The habit of human beings is to eat everything, except airplanes with wings, and stools with four legs. Cantonese still eat Fujianese!

  In my setting at the beginning, the peaceful experience was worse than it is now. His mother and his friends died on the day the city was ruined. The dream is beautiful, but there are things he needs to do in reality, so he must wake up. However, if the people who need him to save in reality have died, and the country has perished, then, should he wake up? Waking up to face a reality worse than death?

need.

   Even if reality makes life worse than death, people have to wake up from their dreams and face all this. this is the truth.

   But later, I really couldn't bear to abuse him, so I saved his mother and his friends.

   Back to the topic again, how can people be saved? Studying medicine can't save it, and religion can't actually save it. In ancient society as a whole, it can't be saved. It still depends on raising the level of productivity and developing the economy (Marx's face)! Huang Si talked to Wen Ling about this point. The poor cannot escape the poverty trap. Ancient society was a cyclical process.

   are all main lines behind. Until the story of Yingming.

  Because I really don’t have time, I seldom spend any more on the line, it’s all about the main line catching up.

   The fourteenth story, the story of Yingming. The theme of this story is "sin".

   Is the child of a third party guilty at birth? Yes, it naturally carries original sin. But in the whole story, who is the source of the evil? Isn't it Yingming's father? Without him derailing, there would be no tragedy and pain afterwards, his concubine would not have to be persecuted, and Yingming would not have to suffer such a tragic fate. The main room that killed Yingming's mother and Yingming himself is certainly a heinous crime, but the indifference of the father who is not acting is even more terrifying. In fact, Yingming was wrong too. His fault was cowardice and evasion. Fortunately, he was finally brave once again with the encouragement of his master.

   The fifteenth story, the story of Bingberry. There is no theme in this story, but Huang Si is a good teacher for me to think about, after all, quite knowledgeable. I really want to find an implicit theme that is probably "educational psychology". Whether it is her getting along with her grandfather, or the tragic childhood symbolized by the horrible castle in the dream, they all reflect the theme of children's education.

   After telling fifteen side stories, let’s talk about the main story.

   The foreshadowing of this book has been laid since the first chapter. Let me summarize it roughly.

In the first chapter, Huang Si passed through. After he was stunned by the soul fragments "first", his parents were anxious and rushed to rescue him. As a result, the Book of Creation judged that his own higher beings were approaching and were extremely dangerous, so they immediately sent him To the inheritance space. This is the starting point of everything.

   Chapter VI, Huang Si's illustrated book on the book is 102 pages. This should be the most obvious foreshadowing in the early stage. I will mention many times later that the illustrations of other creatures will not exceed one page, and that of all human races will not exceed one page. Huang Si's illustrated book is 102 pages long, and he is definitely a species that differs greatly from the human race.

   At this time, Huang Si's state is a dual-form superimposed state, and his appearance is human, as is his parents.

   The veteran society sacrificed four higher beings and used a special method to superimpose human forms on Huang Wei and Shen Jing's bodies, turning them into double forms of beings. As the son of the two, Huang Si inherited this characteristic and also has a dual form. It's just that his age is too young for higher life, and he can only appear in the form of a human being on earth. By the end of this book, he has no way to change... (In the final analysis, it's still too vegetable.)

   Chapter 35, Huang Si discovered that artificial intelligence also has a soul and has become a special form of life. This is actually because his advanced life expertise is "soul" plus "life". Originally, he had only one specialty. The veterans set the soul. Later, after inheriting the inheritance of the Creator, the second specialty came into being. Ordinary people cannot create artificial intelligence life. Huang Sineng did it because he is not a human being, but a high life with the dual expertise of soul + life. Twelve artificial intelligence lives were born under his unintentional influence.

   Chapter 60, the first time I saw Gu Yan, the two had a conversation about appearance. I think this foreshadowing also has a clear directionality, but most people read the text very quickly, passing by in a flash, and will not notice that sentence. However, I have hinted that there is a problem here, and if a reader turns the book back, he will notice it. The birth of Huang Si was the result of careful design, so his appearance is very similar to Gu Yan's race.

   Chapter 64, the core of the world is transformed into life, with personality characteristics, the reason is also related to Huang Si. The green world is really too small. Huang Si stayed there for a while. His specialty "soul + life" affected the world itself, leading to the evolution of the core of the world into an independent life.

  The core of the world was actually just born at that time, so it was extremely naive and didn't understand anything. It can indeed be regarded as Huang Si's child. Huang Si thought he was lying to him, but he did not deceive him. It was really regarded as the core of the world...

   The core of the world originally had a sideline plot, and it was a three-person plot with Kongyu and Shifang, but I felt that the writing was too far from the main line, and 10,000 words were cut by me.

   Chapter 68, Gu Yan found that Huang Si's soul was ascending too fast, and he was very surprised.

At this time, he hadn't noticed the problem on page 102 of the illustrated book. Gu Yan realized it very late. It was because of the problem with the illustrated book that he confirmed that Huang Si was actually a higher being, but it was done, and he didn't want to say it. .

   Chapter 209, finally began to talk about the history of the Creator. Here is the background of the whole plot. In fact, there is also a foreshadowing. Huang Si told Gu Yan that he thinks the beliefs of the two factions are very good, and they can be seamlessly integrated. He is open-minded and feels that the two factions can be united and prosper together, and Gu Yan is almost annoyed.

In fact, the creators of the past dynasties are all firm creationists. Huang Si's difference already implies that his true identity is his own stand-he is a higher being and at the same time the creator of creation. He can accept both schools at the same time. This is the opportunity for the unity of the two factions.

   Chapter 226, I want to go home. This is not foreshadowing. The relationship between Huang Si's family is really good. So that he has time to go back.

Chapter 302, Gu Yan has discovered the truth at this time. The essence of the 16th Creator is a higher being, and it is very likely that the whole thing is a conspiracy of his own. He saw the inheritance of the Creator with his own eyes. To sever, my heart is very painful. However, he could also see that Huang Si himself did not know, and he had no way to blame a child who did not know and could be called a kind-hearted child. What's more, Huang Si cares about Gu Yan very much.

   Feelings are two-way, Gu Yan hates higher beings, but he can't hate Huang Si, so he can only persuade him not to return to Earth.

   Here, it is emphasized once again that Huang Si's own pictorial book is 102 pages, and no other creatures have more than one page at all. A very obvious clue, of course, I did a cover up.

   Chapter 313, Gu Yan's final clue: the first sentence of the meeting, your pictorial book. Gu Yan said if you can guess, please don't feel guilty. It is because although Huang Si himself did nothing wrong, his identity determines that his existence is a major threat to the inheritance of the Creator, but Gu Yan does not want to harm him, even wants to help him, because Gu Yan has teachers and students for him There is love and friendship, Huang Si's character is in his eyes, and he doesn't want him to die.

   Then Huang Si made a lot of guesses, but couldn't guess the truth.

   Chapter 402, Computer Science. It is mentioned that the professional direction was chosen by his parents for Huang Si. In fact, his parents did it on purpose, because this profession is really helpful to the creation of the world. The professional habits of computers will involve the compilation of the underlying code and the interface between different levels.

   Chapter 465, Jieyuan Auction House login interface. In fact, if Huang Si tried to click the auto-entry button "Special for Advanced Life", he would be able to log in automatically. It's a pity that he didn't even think about trying it.

   Chapter 467, foreshadowing. Huang Si is actually not going to be killed by the power of the source, he also has the power of the source, and although he is young, the power of the source is stronger than the "Supreme", which is already weak, higher beings, after all. Is the son of two strong men. When the godhead blew himself up, his instinct protected him. . It can only be said that the supreme calculations are too precise, and there is no way back. He did not expect that Huang Si would rather die by himself and drag it into the water. Huang Si is the kind of character that never shrinks and compromises when things happen, and he can be cruel to himself.

  The character of the protagonist is partly influenced by his race.

   In the past battles of the Creator, the reason why so many higher beings died was mostly because only the power of the original source was the best weapon, so many higher beings blew themselves up directly.

   When I asked Gu Yan to talk about history, I mentioned that higher life has no desires. In order to find the meaning of life, that's why I have faith. Because they have few desires, they sacrifice their lives for faith.

  The man by the river is Huaye, the original creator and the creator of the book of creation.

He knows that Huang Si is a higher life, but he also silently observes his life, knowing that his parents love him very much, and that Huang Si is open-minded and firm-willed, and will not be swayed by his own veteran club. The future development is likely to be Not bad, so I helped him.

   I originally planned to write a special fan to make Hua Ye the villain, but I can’t write it... I will take my time to see when I want to write it again.

   At that time, if Hua Ye did not help him repair his godhead, the Reiki Universe would immediately collapse, and everyone except Huang Si himself would have to die.

  PS, although the supreme phantom is a woman, it is of mod gender. Higher beings don’t have sex, because there is no reproductive ability, so naturally there is no need to distinguish between the sexes. The higher life forms of Huang Si's parents are also mod-gender. Only the human form has gender.

   Chapter 469, I’m too difficult. I conceived this plot when I was 20W, and I only wrote it now. Huang Si's parents have been looking for him, they bought the trumpet of Jieyuan Auction House. Although it is said that there is one person and one account, the user can also be someone else. Parents and mothers can find a few gods they know at random. You don't need to use auction houses. Ask them to help register the auction house, fill in the user name in Chinese, and then help put the goods on the shelves.

By the way, there are so many small and unworthy commodities on the shelves that are priced at 10G, which is really disrupting the order of the auction house. Fortunately, the auction house is operated by artificial intelligence. It only checks for fake and shoddy products that violate the transaction order, and does not check the shelves. Case. Otherwise the trumpet would have been banned...

   Chapter 470, Huang Si discovered the truth, but he was thinking in a wrong direction, thinking that he was a pinched prop. In fact, if he were a prop, Gu Yan would not be so worried. Gu Yan was so worried, mainly because he discovered that Huang Si was a higher being. Gu Yan didn't know why Huang Si didn't know his identity and looked like a human. So he didn't say anything.

   Chapter 473, at first the old couple didn't notice that Huang Si had arrived on Earth, and didn't restore the suspended time in time. Later, when Huang Si's mental force field was unfolding, his father discovered it and quickly recovered. The two pretended that nothing happened.

   The reason Huang Si’s father bought Erguotou in the supermarket downstairs was actually because he discovered that his son had returned, and he bought a bottle of wine to celebrate with him.

   The old couple pretended not to know anything, but they were actually very happy in their hearts. His mother also bought spare ribs and made them for her son.

   Chapter 474, Shen Jing knows that his son likes grilled ribs with shiitake mushrooms, so he bought them specially. There is no habit of eating Shiitake mushrooms in many places across the country. There are more places to eat here in Jiangsu, Zhejiang and Shanghai. And some people don't like to eat shiitake mushrooms very much, because it feels astringent, I like them very much. But because of the astringency, it is generally used to cook pork belly. There are few cases of roasting ribs.

   Chapter 479, the old two are not willing to go to cultivating immortals because they are afraid of being exposed. In fact, the talent of cultivating immortals is related to the strength of the soul. A strong soul will unintentionally gather aura. The soul strength of the old couple is actually stronger than that of Huang Si. Therefore, in order to avoid exposure, the old couple will always keep the aura in the air away. Such a state outside the body. If they don't reject it, their human form really rises to the emperor every minute, faster than Huang Si. Later, Huang Si wanted to give them aura. The two of them forgot about this. Huang Si found that the aura could not penetrate, so he revealed the stuff. Although the two remedied it in time and tried to pretend that it did not happen, Huang Si still noticed.

   Chapter 481, Huang Si is too preconceived. In fact, the kindergarten can't see it because he himself is a higher life. If he went to the middle school and university he had studied, and where he went to work, he would find that he would not see it. Because the personality of divine arts is lower than that of higher beings, so you can't see higher beings. He only noticed that his parents were higher beings, but he didn't notice that he was too.

  The finale chapter, in fact, Hua Ye is regarded as the main battle group, the elder is regarded as the peace group, and the second and third elders are both the main battle group.

   The great elder wanted a peaceful settlement, but the others were not happy, so they started fighting. In the end, Hua Ye died, and the elder was very heartbroken.

   Later, I learned from Huang Si that Hua Ye was still alive in negative time. In fact, the elder was very happy.

   The matter of negative time is not going to be written in this article. Leave it to Gu Yan's exclusive extra.

   Almost all these foreshadowing.

   The protagonist’s identity has been hinted desperately from the beginning, but if you don’t connect it later, you would never think it would be a foreshadowing. To be honest, it took me more than half a year to write the truth behind it, and it was quite difficult for me... I really wanted to spoiler someone halfway through.

   But this is a foreshadowing that cannot be spoiled. His parents are enemy factions, and his identity has his own hostile stance. No one can accept it.

   Actually, there is a clue about the coordinates of the earth in the Jieyuan Auction House. I planned it a long time ago. At that time, I just wrote more than 50 W.

   was planned to be placed in the position of 70W words, and then there will be 30W words in the follow-up, which was exactly one million copies.

   As a result... I did not expect that, alas, the writing is getting longer and longer.

   I always wanted to write as much as possible, and the plot was constantly delayed.

   In order to finish the writing as soon as possible in the later period, I had to rush to catch up with the progress. The higher life appeared as the BOSS early and returned to the earth early.

   The original plan was to write a few more copies in Boundary Yuan to upgrade to a level, but as a result, he returned to Earth before the level was completed.

   The original plan was to forcibly prevent parents from escaping, and put them under house arrest first and slowly persuade them. Later, I found that the portrait was very...not in line with the original setting of a good family relationship.

   It happened that Huang Si was still very good because he returned to the earth when he was just starting out, so he simply changed to a slightly more flexible way to deal with the parent-child relationship.

   As for the main storyline, there are two places where I wrote about crying. One is where Huang Si found out that Gu Yan knew the truth. He finally realized the teacher's care for him. I am a person who grew up in the school system, and my relatives are also teachers. I have a very deep understanding of the feelings between teachers and students. I know that a good teacher’s love for his students is really selfless and is wholeheartedly good for the students. Will pay a lot for his students. There is a saying that there is no kind of education. In fact, a truly great and kind teacher does not care too much about who a student is. He not only educates knowledge, but also educates how to behave. He is an engineer of the true soul. I wrote a teacher like this in my heart, just like Gu Yan.

   Another place is the relationship between Huang Si and his parents. In fact, parents and children often misunderstand, quarrel, escape, and hurt each other, but the love between each other cannot be parted. Huang Si still chose to take the initiative to communicate and eliminate the estrangement in the face of the possibility that his parents may have been deceiving himself, or that his parents are enemies. When parents are evading all this, they desperately chase after them, trying to resolve the relationship. In the end, he also won, and the family reconciled.

   The ending of this story, I figured it out a long time ago, I figured it out when the book was less than 20W words, and I have hinted it many times.

   Huang Si has a very good relationship with his parents, and his parents love and respect him sincerely. The relationship between them is the power that transcends estrangement and hatred.

   Gu Yan said to Huang Si many times that he didn't want him to take revenge, and wanted him to live well. In fact, it led to the ending of the eradication of hatred between the two factions in the future.

   And it is impossible for Huang Si to let Gu Yan go, so he will spend almost all of his time studying how to resurrect Gu Yan.

   Incidentally, there are two ways to measure the strength of higher beings. One is the standard strength, which is equivalent to its own strength. Higher beings have their own methods of attack and defense, as well as many special abilities. I didn't start writing about this. But this setting does exist. The group of higher beings in the Senate can be said to be the group with the strongest standard strength, and the strongest is the Great Elder. The standard strength of Huang Wei and Shen Jing is similar to that of the third elder, and the second elder is slightly stronger than the two of them. The standard strength of "Supreme" is very weak, it can be regarded as the weakest higher being. It has almost no offensive and defensive abilities, and no special abilities, so it can only use mental attacks.

   The second is the strength of expertise. It is related to the type of expertise. Time and space are the two strongest expertise. Therefore, Huang Si's parents are much stronger than the actual combat power of most of the higher beings in the Senate. From the perspective of higher life, Huang Si's expertise is not very good. Both the soul and life specialties belong to the auxiliary specialties, and they have no combat ability. In fact, until the end of the book, his abilities were not related to combat. (This is mainly because the author of this book does not write about fighting.)

   His parents ran away mainly because they didn't want to confront him head-on. If the whole family really started, Huang Si would not be able to beat his parents.

   But as the master of creation, there is still a lot of room for his growth, and he will not be limited by his expertise, and he can study any field.

   Huang Si didn't have a standard strength until the end of the book, because his higher life form hadn't awakened yet, and he was actually about to awaken by the end of the chapter. At this time, Jie Yuan could not hurt him much. Standard strength will only be available after awakening, and now it all depends on the inheritance of the Creator.

In addition, the protagonist of this book is actually reproductively isolated from all the female characters in this book... This is close to the original intention of the heroine of this book. The reason is simple, because he is a higher life, and the higher life is infertile, and It is no longer possible to sacrifice other higher beings in order to cultivate future generations, and it is not necessary. The protagonist doesn't really need offspring or anything. This group of higher beings is born very strong and has an endless life span. It is normal that they have no reproductive capacity and no corresponding desires. As for what Huang Si likes the two-dimensional paper man’s wife, it’s just because he is an otaku and has normal hobbies. In my setting, he likes to play two-dimensional mobile games like most of the two-dimensional mobile games. A bit of lo*ic*n (two-dimensional limited, not involving three-dimensional), will also play mainstream games with friends, such as League of Legends of the Kings.

   Summarize the pros and cons of the plot of the book.

   The first novel for a newcomer, of course, is full of various faults.

   One of the faults is that the foreshadowing is too long and too long, and it is too unobvious. The clues at the beginning are recovered only after a million words at the end, which is terrible.

   The second problem, the supporting characters are written too many and complicated, some of the characters have failed to be portrayed, and the interaction between the characters is not real enough. This is indeed a big problem for me. However, this is not because I didn't write seriously, but because I didn't know how to pinch people... I've been reading and studying recently, and it should change in the future.

The third problem is that the protagonist’s personality is not uniform before and after. This is mainly because I am too casual in writing. At the beginning, there was no specific characterization of the protagonist. I just wanted to write a cool and awesome protagonist. There will be many descriptions of indifference and coldness. Its essence is probably the reflection of the middle and second complex in my heart. Well, in the final analysis, I am still immature. I have already noticed this. Don't let your Secondary 2 interests drift around when writing a book (cover your face deeply...).

   is also extremely casual in the later stage. What the protagonist does is judged based on my instinct, or follow the plot completely, without paying much attention to the problem of image formation. More, let’s use my own habits. In fact, the person who doesn’t know me the least is me. The consequence of this is that the protagonist’s character is written very erratic.

   In the initial setting, Huang Si was a bit arrogant, with a hard-spoken mouth, a straight-steel man, a low EQ and a high IQ. This is probably the feeling.... As for not shaping well, it is indeed due to lack of experience and willful recklessness.

  Fourth problem, the plot trend. In fact, this book is not a creation essay. Although the title of the book gives people this illusion, I set the direction at the beginning of invincible flow + behind-the-scenes text. As a result, when I wrote it, I was in front of the scene. I was also thinking, why, I didn't control...

   I have read too little behind-the-scenes articles. To be precise, I have read too little new web articles in recent years. But I really like this type, which may be related to my love to play strategy games. My book is also written in accordance with the route of Civilization 4. Including demographics, miracles, and technology... there will be some shadows in the book. Since I finished writing, I have been reading other people's books to make up lessons.

   My positioning of the protagonist is a strategic game player, although it may not be well reflected, and there is a difference between the real world and the game world where you can constantly save and read the loop. Regarding these, if I write about the subject behind the scenes in the future, I will try my best to coordinate.

  According to the opinions of the authors and friends in the group, this book should be written directly as a science and technology farming article, creating some special biological forms, climbing the black science and technology tree, and so on. The issue is! I have been out of science for a long time! I used to be a technology enthusiast who would use magazines like Scientific American as a casual reading~www.novelbuddy.com~ But since I started to study liberal arts, I just... OK, I’m lazy, and I don’t always read the latest technology anymore. Intelligence, I don’t teach myself science and engineering knowledge, I’m already a waste cat! (I will definitely make it up in the future!)

  Fifth problem, emotional handling. The keynote of this book at the beginning was no woman in charge. There were no emotional lines outside of family and friendship, but it almost didn't restrain it in the middle. Fortunately, some unknown sense of responsibility made me control my hand. The woman who had promised to have no heroes until the end must have no heroes. The emotional line is rare, and the ending is to return to the family. However, due to the lack of experience of the author, the writing is still immature. This will be improved in the future.

  The sixth problem is that there is no villain, no danger, no tension, no perseverance. Someone told me that traversal texts are generally not taken home as the ultimate goal, but I have used them...not only that, going back is the main line of this text and an important plot element. What can I do? I have committed a lot of taboos (cover my face).

   My good friend told me that it’s easy to collapse without a villain, and it’s true.

   Avoid the next book!

   The seventh problem, there is no meticulous planning, and every thought comes out every time. And many of the plots are thunderous and poisonous... It's really because I didn't think about it.

  The eighth problem is that there are too many smuggled goods. The preaching element is too strong, but the plot is not well planned.

   Thank you very much for supporting such immature me. It is you who taught me a lot.

   Next book, I will not make so many mistakes again!

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