Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 10 .5 Modify the progress

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   Today's revision progress is chapter 686-697.

   At present, the Rat Tide plot has ended.

In this plot, first of all, together with the revisions made a few days ago, the biological pollution plan of Qianchi Shendai was refined a little. He used the gap between Chen Shi and Kashima to target the shadow, causing biological pollution, and it was precisely The Forbidden Inquisition was transferred due to the war of the demigods in the south.

   In this way, the plan will appear more reasonable.

  Secondly, when I rewatched this plot, I still felt that although the character of iodophor had very little brush and ink, it was well written, and a few sentences were added later, which did not affect the main plot.

   In this revision, what I want to change the most is the embarrassing place, such as what Xiaosan said, "You are going to become your own heroes!" It's really out of place to look at it now, and I feel embarrassed.

So when I write a book, I am really afraid of using too much force. When I write the climax, I always listen to songs, such as st.reunion, Lonely Brave, Infinity, Internationale, Unstoppable, Fade and other songs to arouse my emotions and put myself in a high-pitched and In the emotional overdraft, let yourself be in the situation.

Sometimes I even listen to the song for two hours first, wait until the mood is in place, then write it, and write while crying... But when you watch it, there is actually no background music, and then my mood may be too high, and then Embarrassed.

   This is not very good, it means that the level is not good.

   When I read Squid's book, what I admire most about him is that he is very restrained in writing, and some places can be left to write, but he is very restrained, and it will be better.

   I hope that the next book I can put it on and restrain it well.

   Watching this episode again, but iodophor and Qingchen didn't say a word when they looked at each other across the building. It was so peaceful, but it made my eyes wet when I saw it. I need to summarize the experience and lessons.

   In the end, it was the story of Chiaki Kamidai who didn’t die in this battle. In fact, the original text intended to kill him, but I always felt that it was sloppy for such an old thing to die in a wave, so I forced the reversal within a chapter.

   Now, the foreshadowing in the early stage has also been revised, and this paragraph has also been revised to make his life more reasonable. In the later stage, he will also have a deeper conflict with Yunluo of the God Age.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!