Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 8 .28 Modify progress

   I read the feedback from everyone yesterday, and I am very happy that you have given me a lot of feedback.

   I sorted out everyone's feedback.

   First of all, the first mode is chosen to give up, because everyone reacts that they don’t want to spend money, while others can read the full version without spending money, which is unfair to readers who have already spent money. I respect everyone's ideas and give up the first option.

  Secondly, the number of readers who choose the second and the third is almost the same.

   But, from my personal point of view, I would prefer this work to be better from the beginning.

   So I decided to choose the second way, which is:

  I will revise the current original text. After the revision, there will be a (revise) mark on the title.

  Because of choosing the second type, some readers who want to see the ending may feel a little sad, so I think that every day in the next day, I will issue a single chapter to update you on the current revision progress in time until the update is resumed.

   the idea of ​​doing this,

   On the one hand, it is to let everyone know the progress of the modification;

   On the one hand, it is also to let everyone know what has been modified, so that many people do not have to look back, and can see where the modification is in a single chapter every day.

   Of course, what I most hope is that you can relive the world of "Night Nomenclature" with me.

   Synchronize the current modification progress with everyone:

  From yesterday to today, a total of 40 chapters have been edited, that is, chapters 1-40.

  Ye's naming is still very good before and mid-term, and I am quite satisfied, so the revision is not big.

   There are three overall modification directions:

  The first direction: delete unnecessary words and sentences.

   The process of re-examining the manuscript also helped me to discover something interesting, that is, no matter how well I thought it was written, it would still be filled with a lot of nonsense. Because the new book period requires 6,000 words every day, there will always be a bit of nonsense.

   I didn't think much of it before, but now I look back and it's a bit dazzling, so the current chapters 1-40 are more refined.

   Deleted the space, about one-fifth of the way, I just took a look, and my total word count began to drop...

   The modification of this paragraph will not affect reading.

  The second direction: Fix some bugs, such as the first meeting of Li Shutong, Lin Xiaoxiao and Qingchen.

  Actually, the character of Qingzhun is included in the initial setting, but everyone knows that things like outline and setting only exist in the initial setting and may be replaced or changed at any time.

So here comes the problem. In the conception, Kyung Joon is a great older brother, but in the process of looking back this time, I feel that the settings I gave him were still too thin for him, so I stood by Kyung Joon. From the perspective of thinking about Qingzhun's life. After the refinement, a lot of plots have been added. To make the front and back more harmonious, Li Shutong did not know anything about Qingchen.

  The third direction: Modify the line of Jiang Xue.

  Because I once compromised with the market, I am not very good at writing about ambiguous relationships, so I wrote some inexplicable things.

   Looking back, the more you look, the more awkward it becomes.

  The results are there and the money is earned, but the taste of this work is not right.

   Therefore, I deleted some ambiguous content between Qingchen and Jiang Xue, which should not have been there, to make this work and the characters in it more pure.

   That’s all for now. If there are any changes to the plot line, I will let you know.

   Also, it is a pity to miss some characters, such as the former King Chuang, you have guessed his identity for a long time, but I set a foreshadowing at that time, he actually crossed over to a mechanical dog...

   Later, I suddenly discovered that this person had been forgotten by me

   To be honest, this troubles made me realize that I may not be suitable for long-term serialization. My spirit is really not suitable for diluting to more than three million words, maybe two million is the most suitable length.

   Okay, that's all for today. Subsequent revisions will be reported to you every day. Thank you very much for your support and company! thank you all!