Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 8 .29 Modify progress

  Revised chapters 41-70 today.

  Li Shutong came here and began to have a deep relationship with Qingchen's master and apprentice, and when he rewatched it, he found it more interesting.

   So far, the most interesting characters in this book are Li Shutong, Li Xiurui, Qing Zhun, He Jinqiu, Li Yunshou, and the three surnames are Li.

   However, it was written too hastily. Except for Li Xiurui, everyone else should try to be fuller.

   In addition, although Li Shutong disappeared due to his mission, there are a lot of scenes missing, and some new content will be added in the future.

  Students who don’t want to read it again can read it in the daily revision notes.

  Tell me what I repaired today:

   First, the character Du Yihong, the head teacher of Qingchen High School, was deleted.

   In the original text, she suddenly resigned as the head teacher and then disappeared.

   In the setting, as a teacher, she became a tattoo artist after transmigration, mixed in the club, and reconnected with the protagonist group.

   But Ye's nomenclature has too many characters, and the audio dramas have all reported that this is the work they have done with the most characters...

  So, some characters disappeared in the serialization, because I can't remember her a little, and I don't have the energy to write for her.

   Secondly, the character Qingyan was deleted. In the original text, he was the one who arranged for Lu Guangyi and Qingchen to enter Prison No. 18, and was bought by Qing’s second and fourth rooms.

   But looking back now, this character is actually a bug, because everything was arranged by Kyung Joon.

   He is also very redundant.

   Again, added a small detail.

   In chapter 62, Li Shutong took Qingchen out of prison for the first time, Li Shutong ate a piece of braised pork, and Qingchen ate a piece of fried noodles.

  Chen and Qing launched a surprise attack to surround them. A combat team went up from the safe passage, but was knocked unconscious by the mysterious man.

   I forgot about this foreshadowing before.

   Added details here, and determined that it was Qingzhun's actions. The elder brother protected the younger brother from being disturbed when he was eating.

   Again, modify the conflict before and after the steam train: the tail carriage is full of gold coins, and it is also full of bones.

   In the end, some ambiguous descriptions are still deleted, but Kongyin of the Age of God is the main character, and the character cannot be deleted.

  According to the progress, it should be repaired until the seedlings appear tomorrow, right? Focus on repairing here.

In the future, He Xiaoxiao will also increase the role of the show appropriately. According to the setting, this account is actually Jiuran, but the character of Jiuran was not brought up in the follow-up, so that after the boss He left, when I wrote about Kyushu, I didn't know who to write about. .

   Okay, that's it for today, see you tomorrow.