Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 8 .30 Modify progress

   Let’s talk about today’s revision progress.

   Today's revised chapter is 71-100, and the current chapter progress is one-ninth completed, but there are several subsequent parts that may involve major content revisions, which may slow down the progress. The further back you go, the harder it is to change.

   But so far, seeing that the content is getting more and more reasonable, and the plot structure has been adjusted, I am still very happy inside.

  Before I decided to revise, it was very uncomfortable to think of so many flaws.

  Some time ago, there was even a feeling of breaking a jar and ending it for the sake of ending.

   is different now, and the mentality is different.

   Then talk about today's modification

The first modification of    is that the gangsters went to kidnap Jiang Xue, and happened to meet Hu Xiaoniu and others' self-inflicted snare.

  In the original text, Jiang Xue sent a message to Lu Yuan, but Lu Yuan stopped due to arrears.

This was done to prevent them from contacting Kunlun, but it was actually quite bad. After all, how could someone like Lu Yuan be so stupid, even knowing that the gangsters had entered Los Angeles, he still didn't keep his cell phone open. .

   So the new content is that the gangsters brought signal blocking equipment.

   The second modification is the process of Hu Xiaoniu paying gold bars.

  In the original text, a gold bar was paid for the life-saving grace, but this is completely inconsistent with Hu Xiaoniu’s background and the luxury of giving away a watch of more than 300,000 yuan. After all, a gold bar is only more than 30,000 yuan.

   So in the new revision, one becomes ten.

  The third revision is to modify the logical sequence of Qingchen's discovery of the ghost in the Laojun Mountain incident. This has little impact, so I won't go into details for now, and it's not much different from the original text.

The fourth revision of    is that in the early stage, Qingchen insisted on making deals with Li Shutong, and exchanged the fruits of his labor for Li Shutong's help, euphemistically called independence.

   But in fact, when I re-watched this section, I thought that Qing Chen was actually not so thin-skinned, and this section was a bit hypocritical, so I deleted it.

   Now the content is that Qing Chen calmly accepted the benefits given by the master, and even wanted to order more...

   After all, this is the knight...

The fifth revision of    is that when the original text stated the number of gangsters in Laojunshan, I actually checked it several times at the time, but the result was still wrong.

   The actual number should be nine, but I kept saying it was eight.

   This is embarrassing to think about...

   Now, it has been revised back!

   Then talk about some small details that you want to modify in the future.

  The first is that two Kunlun members, Wrench and Hawthorn, died on Laojun Mountain to save students.

   The Morse code they passed on during their lifetimes "No regrets in this life, take care" was written down by Qingchen and put into his wallet.

   At that time, I planned to make it play a very important role in some changes in Qingchen, but I forgot.

  This, we must return to the plot in the future.

   The second is that I re-examined the character He Jinqiu at the beginning of the chapter. I found that the description of him in the mid-term was too little.

   He was actually a character who took a small detour. Even in the episode of Whale Island, many people wondered why Qingchen was unwilling to help him.

The reason is that, in my concept, he is a person who has turned a little bit bad, and then returned to the right path, but I didn't write it, I thought I wrote it, so my perception, and the recognition of book friends There is a discrepancy...

   This is also more embarrassing.

   Alright, that’s all for today, and I’ll share the progress with you every day in the future!

  See you all tomorrow!