Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 8 .31 Modify progress

   Talk about today's revision progress, chapters 101-130.

   Let’s talk about what was modified today.

The first revision of    is that Li Dongze intercepted Laojun Shannai ghost transfer student. In the original text, Li Dongze took a lot of people to No. 7 city.

   But now, looking at the previous content, this is unrealistic, so it was changed to him alone.

   The second revision is Lin Xiaoxiao's remarks about Chen Jiazhang and Wang Xiaojiushi, which is not important.

   To sum up these two characters, the writing is actually very bad.

  Chen Jiazhang failed to describe the character's characteristics. The brush and ink were used, but the practicality was not used, so it seemed that this character was very tasteless.

   Be sure to revise it in the future.

   The third revision is to delete the role of Yu Junyi, the study committee member.

  In the original text, he also entered Prison No. 18 as a time walker, and then confirmed Liu Dezhu's identity as a 'big guy'.

  This character is actually not too necessary, so without changing the character, some scenes were cut, and it was a little more passerby.

   This is also one of the main core goals of my revision: to remove some unnecessary things and refine some main characters.

The fourth modification of    is the first encounter between Qin Yiyi and Qingchen.

  In the original text, Qin Yiyi's face control is a bit abnormal, so in this revision, I will hope that she is more normal.

   In the future, we also need to add some of her roles.

   This character is also one of my regrets when I wrote the original text. At that time, I should have given her more scenes and pen and ink.

   However, during the serialization process, she slowly faded out of sight, resulting in many subsequent plots not being established.

   This is a bit similar to when I wrote He Jinqiu. Some of the stories in the middle were not written, resulting in a misunderstanding between the author and book friends.

   The fifth modification is that I found a sentence at the end of chapter 114: This book will not have supporting characters die. This sentence was deleted.

   Let’s talk about some new ideas and some regrets.

   First of all, the second round of the shadow battle in City 18 is a bit anticlimactic.

  The task of the shadows is to unite the people of the Lee family, and then establish the connection between the Qing family and the Lee family.

  In the original setting, it should be Qingchen who took Li Shu and the others to 'beat' the shadow candidates after he became the emperor's teacher, but the plot ended too early.

  The aftermath of this is that the shadow battle is not so interesting, and Qingchen and Li Shu have too few fetters of Li's children.

   So that when Li Shi and Qing Chen were separated in the future, the scenes would appear too thin, and Li Shi did not stand up for any characters.

   The one who barely stood still was Li Changqing alone.

   So we will add some new content in this part later, Li Shu, Li Yunshou, Li Changqing, Lao Jiu (later renamed Lao Twenty-one).

   In fact, the old nine, who was holding the gun next to Li Changqing, should have had more roles. In the setting, this is the new bystander leader after Zheng Yuandong left office, but I also lost it by writing and writing.

   Secondly, after Qingchen became an inspector in city No. 10, the struggle between the Parent Association and the Mechanicism became a bit anticlimactic.

   It was originally intended as a foreshadowing, the Mechanic God religion should be a stepping stone and a sharpening stone for the parents' meeting to gradually enter the stage. As a result, it was written and written, and it disappeared in this book naturally.

   As a result, the growth of the parent-teacher association was blank before Qingchen rectified the lower three districts, so it was extremely inappropriate.

   Well, that's all for today!

  See you all tomorrow!