Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .03 Modify the progress

   Let me directly say that today's revisions have been revised to 200 chapters, and the progress is not bad.

  The first modification, today is the first time that the plot has been greatly changed, mainly involving the last battle of Qingchen fighting the underground black fist.

  In the original text, Qing Chen relied on his knight infuriating to make his opponent Huang Zixian cry, unable to see the surrounding environment, and finally won.

   But when I look at this plot, I have a problem: he came to the boxing match to hone his skills, and it would be boring if he used the knight infuriating.

   It's like everyone is working very **** one thing, and then at the end, Qingchen said that I was hanging.

   This is very unreasonable.

   Looking at this plot again, I will also feel that the biggest advantage of Qingchen's mind has not been brought into play.

   So the newly revised plot is that Qingchen studied the opponent's battle, designed a foreshadowing, and found a chance to win after intriguing with the opponent.

   The second modification is to delete some characters that do not affect reading at all, such as Chen Shi, etc., even if the book friends don’t remember it, it doesn’t matter.

  The third revision is that Qingchen made a mistake in the original text, which caused Yangyang to quickly understand the details of his identity, which is not in line with Qingchen's character. Maybe it was to promote the plot to leave a mistake, and now it is corrected.

   Let’s talk about the two missed pits.

   The first one was the supermarket owner who once played chess with Qingchen. He took care of Qingchen so much, but in the end, Qingchen and Yangyang looked back at the past in the late stage of cancer, but did not meet the elder.

   should play a game of chess and win another 20 yuan from the opponent.

   and leave some gifts.

   This belongs to me, the author, who has been writing for a long time and forgot, but Qingchen should not forget it, so I will add it later.

   The second is that Qing Chen pretended to be Xu Linsen in Prison No. 18 and tricked Guo Huchan to grab the middle-aged health care manual.

   In the follow-up, after Guo Huchan learned about Qingchen's ability, he should have realized who was cheating on him, but it was not written later, and it will be added later.

   This time, we found a lot of problems.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow.