Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .06 Modify the progress

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   Today's revision progress is 260-280.

   At present, the daytime organization has just rescued Zhang Chengze, and Qingchen has just entered Li's school as a teacher. Looking back on the plot of his scramble for an office position, I still find it quite interesting...

   Today's revisions mainly focus on saving Li Chengze.

   In the original text, Zhang Chengze asked Bai Tian to help in the inner world to take care of it, expressing that the time traveler group wanted to cut off the business, but Zhang Chengze went back on his word.

   Qingchen taught the group of four, and then rescued Zhang Chengze.

   After that, they rescued Luo Wanya.

  The story of this protection fee is over.

   At present, the plot of the passers-by in the world has been deleted. In the future, the business of these passers-by will be merged into Freemasonry. Then, in the daytime, more people will be charged for protection, and these resources representing the world's richest people will be merged into the Hu Group, otherwise the rise of the Hu Group in the original text would be too abrupt.

  In the original text, the intersection between Nangong Yuanyu and Qingchen of the Freemasonry Society is a little less, and they started to practice with the day in a hasty manner, and the follow-up has no special features, and it does not reflect the wisdom of their group of scholars.

   So start adding this part of the plot tomorrow, let them have a confrontation with the day because of business, and finally return to the original plot line.

   This revision plan is to enrich the plot of this part of the characters, otherwise the follow-up will appear too thin and 'exit' invisibly.

   What I am most dissatisfied with about the plot in the second half is that many things are too hasty, and many lines are not developed.

  The newly added plots will be explained in the revision progress single chapter.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!

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