Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .13 Modification progress

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   Today's revision progress is 391-404.

   It's a bit surprising to stop suddenly at the serial number 404...

   There are two modifications today:

   The first one is to lay down the foreshadowing of the Mechanicism, and then the content of the Mechanicus will be written out in the next few days.

   The second is to modify the original story of the crab fishing boat to make the content smoother.

  In the original text, the description of the crab fishing boat is very complicated. When I re-examined it myself, I felt that the number of words was quite a lot, six thousand words per chapter, but the actual progress was really a bit slow.

   So this part has been a bit streamlined.

   In addition, the climax of this plot is a bit perfunctory, especially the life and death challenge this time, I am still thinking about how to modify it better.

  There are two climaxes that I don’t think were written well in my memory, one is the life-and-death challenge here, and the other is the battle of the demigods when Qingchen came out of the A02 base. Different from He Jinqiu's battle and No. 10 city rat tide battle, the spirit of He Jinqiu's battle is the most satisfying to me recently, but this character has less paving in the early stage. Although the No. 10 city rat tide battle is OK, but The sensational force is too much, in short, it has to be repaired, but it can be tolerated.

   The crab fishing boat here and the battle of the demigods are the ones that I think are very bad, and they didn't write the spirit.

   are all focused on modifying the target.

  This part has been revised, let’s put it together tomorrow.

   Another digression, the first one is congratulations to me for being collected by the British Library in the first series, which is quite unexpected.

The second is that there are fan activities in the book review area. You can participate in writing fan art and drawing fan pictures. The cash rewards are still relatively generous. Some friends who have no financial conditions for the time being have a place to earn extra money, which can be regarded as giving back to old readers.

   This event was held for a long time with my private money, and it will be held regularly after the night is over.

   I watched this event, I had this opportunity to make money when I was in school, I would definitely participate in it every time, I was really poor at that time...

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!