Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .16 Modify progress

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   Today's revision progress is chapter 434-443.

   Today's changes are still relatively large, including chapters 434 and 435 being rewritten.

In the original text, He Xiaoxiao’s group chat suddenly merged with the Time Walker Conference, and a large group of people came in, such as Jianshouqing, Shancheng Spicy Chicken, etc., but in fact they did not play a sufficient role in the group chat. These people But it is really salty fish and passers-by, there is no need to enter this highest-level group.

  I reflected for a while, this may be the reason why He Xiaoxiao’s group chat disappeared in the plot later. The characters are too complicated and meaningless.

   It is easy to get bored when writing, so I gradually stopped writing later.

   There is also the rule made by He Xiaoxiao (everyone must share information every month), which made me feel tired to write, so I don’t want to write anymore.

   But in fact, the basis of group wear is not what happened in the inner world. I think the interaction of timewalkers in the first half is also one of the foundations of this theme, so in the change line, try to make group chat start to return.

   So after the modification, He Xiaoxiao had a total of 15 people in the group chat.

  The list of personnel is as follows:

  Bingyan-Qingchen

  Quiet Mountain-Zheng Yuandong

   Taboo ACE-999-He Jinqiu

  Phantom Feather-Chen Yu

  Zard-Zard Zheng Xiang

  Qingbao - God's Empty Sound

  Yue Er-Member of the Taboo Inquisition April

  Land Press-Jiang Yichen, Kashima Time Walker, Top-notch Fresh Meat in the World

   King Chuang-Zhang Chuang, Mechanical Dog

   Liu Dezhu - Liu Dezhu

  Li Si-Fortunate to be around the guardian

  Little Genius-Young

  Haicheng Wu Yanzu-Chen Sui

  The Crown - Gyeongwon

  He Xiaoxiao - Jiu Ran

   Let me talk about the idea of ​​a few characters. First of all, I hope that all members of the forces will gather in this group chat: Qing, Kashima, Kamdai, Chen, Taboo Inquisition, Spades, Matrix, Hongye, Puppet Master.

   The identity of Yue’er is determined to allow the Forbidden Tribunal to return to the plot in the middle and late stages (including the containment conditions of some taboos, and more descriptions of taboos)

   The identity of Li Si was determined to enrich the content of the Shadow War.

   There are also Qingyuan, Jiuren and others.

   In this way, the bonds within the group will be deeper, and the collisions between time walkers in the future will be more interesting, and some people will not be offline for no reason.

   enriches the characters.

  I have been reflecting for a long time, and I must admit that I am not only tired from serializing for a long time, but also because I have no experience in writing super-long novels, so the stall is too large and there are too many branch lines, so it is easy to miss the branch lines.

   These branch lines are even in the setting and outline, but they can’t be taken care of when they are written.

   If it is a traditional web article, with the protagonist's straight-line practice and upgrade, most of the supporting characters can be discarded after they can't keep up with the protagonist's upgrade, but if it is a closed-loop plot, similar things cannot happen.

   Let’s talk about subsequent changes: Chapters 440-443 are rewritten.

  In the original text, the plot of Qingchen pretending to be a shadow to release the mission was a little sloppy, but the new version is more reasonable.

   And now in this version, the task released by Qingchen is no longer to go directly to No. 065 Forbidden Land, to prepare to trade Qingmu with the gods.

   Instead, I wrote this branch line for the Mechanicism first.

  City 10, as the headquarters of the Mechanicum, is also the birthplace of the parent-teacher association, so if the parents’ association wants to follow the development of the plot, it is necessary to completely remove the force of the Mechanicus.

In the original text, this plot was even hidden. This time, I decided to at least write the whole thing. At the same time, the removal of the Mechanicus and the third round of the shadow battle are parallel. At this time, Qingchen's power is still very strong. He is thin and only C-rank in strength, so he has to use the shadow candidates to achieve his goals.

   This piece of content should be released after the rewrite tomorrow, and I will explain it in the revision progress at that time.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!