Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .20 Modify progress

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   Revised progress 465-479 today.

  I am really tired today, because this episode was the biggest failure in the early and mid-term.

  Qingchen went north all the way after joining the crew, because the shadow used his fishing relationship to kill a lot of people, and finally he was caught by the gods and took him to the north to seize the house.

When    was serialized, there was quite a lot of controversy about this plot. Looking back, I think it was simply not well written, so this is also one of the plots I most want to fix.

   Always wanted to fix it.

   Let’s talk directly about the plot after the change.

When   Qingchen was besieged by the wolves, he guessed that Yunhe of the gods was coming for him, so he chose to leave alone and lead the pursuers away.

   Here, it is re-set that Yan Chunmi and Song Lingwei are the characters who helped the Qing family master to complete the plan. This plot plays down Song Lingwei, mainly because this character is a bit tasteless. It is set that Song Niao is a secret spy, Harrier Falcon, also to make the plot that she appeared in the early stage more reasonable, and it will not appear in the later stage. (This setting is actually not important, just mention it)

   Qingchen was besieged by wolves and captured alive. The plot here is mainly optimized, there are no major changes, and the battle is not so deliberately sensational.

   Then, a new plot branch was added to the plot of the house capture after arriving at the production base.

  The generation of God captured Qingchen alive and prepared plan A: send Qingchen to the A02 base, force Qingchen to return to B-level after his return, and then let his ancestors take him away.

Plan B: Take Qingchen directly at the production base. If Yunhe of Shendai can't escape the encirclement with Qingchen, he will throw Qingchen after being taken back to the Qing family. At this time, Qingchen has already been taken away. , can be an undercover agent for the generation of gods, and even if exposed, it can damage the shadow's right-hand man.

   Originally, Kagami Yunhe was going to carry out plan A, but the head of Kagami stepped in and didn't want his ancestor Kagashi Chichi to get the knight's body.

   So Plan B was launched.

   After Plan B, Yunhe Shendai found that Qingchen could not be taken away and informed the owner of the matter.

   As a result, the owner of the family decided to continue with plan A, and let the gods Yunhe send Qingchen to the ancestors, planning to let the ancestors fail to seize the house.

   When I wrote it, I wanted to clarify the internal struggle of the Age of God, but I didn't write it clearly. This time I wrote it more clearly.

   In addition, in the original text, it was outrageous that a person like Yunhe Shendai didn’t even have a satellite phone, so this time I gave him one.

   Also, in the original text, Yunhe was forced to go offline abruptly, and it was very outrageous that there was still a long period of time in the follow-up of God’s generation.

   So this time, these two bugs were changed. Most people in the subsequent generation of gods did not know that Qingchen could not be taken away.

   is more reasonable.

  At the same time, because I kept deliberately not writing about the story of God’s generation preparing to take She Qingchen, many book friends questioned why I didn’t kill Qingchen directly, why didn’t I just cut off his hands and feet or castrate him. Although after reading the later article, you will know why, but this time the revision put some things forward, at least so that new book friends will know what is going on when they see it.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!