Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 10 .10 Modify progress

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   Today's revision progress is chapter 761-763.

   The reason why there are so few is because 761 has been rewritten, with a total of 8500 words, and the life-and-death plot of Qingchen mountaineering and skiing has been rewritten. You can watch it for free.

  The last time he killed Arthur and Li Yunze, he completed the life-and-death test, which was abbreviated in two hundred words.

   This time, he took the initiative to take Chen Jiazhang, who had been wasted for ten years, to walk the road of knighthood again, awakening this alcoholic and depressed teacher.

   I feel that this modification is quite meaningful, making this plot more substantial and richer.

In the past, Qingchen regarded the life and death of the knight as a utilitarian means. As long as the life and death test was completed, he could upgrade to fight monsters. So the biggest significance of this life and death test is that the first is to affect Chen Jiazhang, and the second is that he himself finally Understand that when the founder of the knight challenged, it was not to open the genetic lock, but for the belief of the knight. The genetic lock is just a gift from the world to the knight.

  The description of several life and death levels is also the focus of later revisions, such as wingsuit flight and the last life and death level.

   In fact, the last life and death test could not satisfy me, and it was also the main reason for this revision. At that time, because the update time was approaching, I had to post it, but I regretted it after I posted it.

   This regret is as uncomfortable as eating a fly, so a rewrite is necessary.

   In addition, explain that the revision progress is a summary after all, and it is impossible to explain the details perfectly.

  Take yesterday as an example, in the battle of Mount Everest, Qingchen’s injuries were traumatic injuries, such as the stab wounds on his thighs that Arthur used to cut off with the Cheshes, which cannot be recovered from the shroud.

   So I didn't explain this detail, and some book friends would ask in this chapter: Can it be restored without the shroud?

  Even in the original, the shroud could not restore his trauma, and it is even more impossible in the new version.

   Saying this is not to say that everyone is wrong, but that the outline really cannot be explained in great detail, so it will make you feel that there is something wrong with the outline, but since I changed it, there must be a reason...

   Well, that's all for today, it's quite exhausting to rewrite life and death.

  See you all tomorrow!