Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .09 Modify progress

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   Today's revision progress is chapter 321-338.

   Let’s talk about today’s revisions:

  The first one is that Chapter 321 continues to increase the details of Freemasonry, and then revises the plot of the first appearance of Freemasonry. In the original text, they are to include timewalkers from various high schools, which is very high-profile.

   This time, they approached and investigated in a low-key manner because they were cut off from business by the day.

   The second modification is to delete some descriptions of Shuangxiu and Huanxizong. The settings are still there, but too many descriptions have been deleted and diluted.

   The third is to modify the plot structure. In the original text, Kyushu and Kunlun joined forces to block the reverse crossing plan of Shendai and Kashima, and prevent Shendai Kashima from finding someone to replace Li Changqing.

  The original combat paragraph here is very loose, now it will be more compact and less broken.

   In my impression, when I wrote this story, in order to keep more than 10,000 updates every day, it started to break down a little. It didn't start to get better until Mr. Li suspended his death and died in the forbidden land of No. 002.

   During that time, there was too much pressure to update, and there was less time to think every day, so the plot was not so rigorous.

   The fourth one is to modify the battle logic of the daytime during the Kamidai Kongyin press conference. The main plot has not changed, but common sense mistakes such as 'there is only one safe passage in a building' have been corrected. At that time, I was a little nervous on purpose.

   The current plot should be more natural.

   Having said that, talk about the next plan.

   In the next two chapters, Mr. Li's father will be suspended from death.

   After that, after Qingchen went to No. 002 Forbidden Land, he would directly take office and become the inspector of the secret espionage department.

   In this way, the second round of the shadow battle will end inexplicably, and characters such as Li Shu will also disappear for a long time inexplicably.

   So next, we will add a new master and apprentice plot before the suspended animation. After writing it, I will send it together. I will talk about the plot outline in a single chapter tomorrow.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!

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