Nomenclature of Night - Chapter 9 .14 ​​Modification progress

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   Today's revision progress is chapter 405-412.

   There are not many chapters to be repaired today, but I am really tired. The main thing is to rewrite the climax of chapters 411 and 412 of life and death. About 5000 words of new content are added. If you are interested, please watch it for free.

   As I said before, this paragraph was written sloppily in the original text.

  I remembered at the end of the chapter, that time was the time of the Dota TI International Invitational Tournament. As an old knife friend, I was playing 4D games every day while playing Dota.

   The competition started immediately when I wrote Chapter 412, so this climax was not refined.

  According to the usual practice, after writing the climax, it must be refined. For example, the plot of the falling of the scepter of the gods and the plot of Qingchen climbing the cliffs of the green mountains are all refined two or three times before they are published.

   Under normal circumstances, the draft and the intensive repair will be completely two grades of content. The draft is to explain things clearly, and the intensive repair is the process of decorating the rough house.

After    refinement, the original plot structure may even change.

  For example, the last three chapters of the first series, "Darkest Hour", have been revised three times, and they are completely different from the first edition.

  Many people think that the ending of the first sequence is abrupt, but in my opinion, Dawang is really unfinished, but the ending of the first sequence is indeed the abrupt and heart-wrenching ending that I want. Many book friends want to know the follow-up, so I wrote the follow-up in the nomenclature of the night, instead of writing a postscript like a running account.

  I sent the first and third versions of the ending to the supervising producer of the first sequence animation, she said that the difference between before and after the refinement is too great.

   Of course I know that my level is just that, but it’s still quite awkward to see such words.

Therefore, when I wrote the 412th chapter of Ye Ye, it has always been a pity that I did not refine it. Now that everyone's emotions are not in the plot at that time, it may not seem that deep, but if you read it coherently now, it is indeed better than before. better.

  Recently discovered a pattern, many books have been on the shelves for 2-3 months, the plot will be a little loose, and the structure is slightly loose, which also reflects that the author is likely to enter a bottleneck from this time, that is, the exhaustion period.

   I must learn a lesson from this book. On the one hand, I remind myself not to go astray and be alert to such a situation again. Or they will choose to write half of the book and then release it, but then I don’t know when the new book will be released.

By the way, there is a little Easter egg of Qingchen and Yangyang hidden in chapter 412, but it will not affect the follow-up plot trend, or that sentence, this intensive revision only optimizes the plot and enriches the characters, and does not make changes to the main line. .

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow! Good night.