Nomenclature of Night - ~ Let's talk a little bit and listen to everyone's opinions

   After thinking about this for a long time, I decided to talk to you today.

  I'm the kind of person who can't help but think about flying when I'm alone.

   It has been 23 days since the lockdown,

  Recently, I have calmed down and thought about a lot of things. Since joining the industry, I have been thinking a lot.

   Think of your own strengths.

  Think about your weaknesses.

   Think about your own merits and demerits.

   Think of the pride and regret of the work.

   Indeed, people like to look through the past once they are quiet.

I am no exception.

   During this period of time, I started to look back at the worlds I wrote, and I couldn’t help but feel some regrets and disappointments.

   When I look back at myself, I also have difficulty finding peace.

   For me now, I want to refine every work I have ever done.

   In the past few days, every time I started writing the book "Nomenclature of the Night", I had already reached a certain level of magic.

   Sitting in front of the computer, there is no follow-up plot in my mind, all the regrets of the updated chapters and the idea that it will be better if the details are changed.

  I admit, I'm stuck in place right now.

  Long-length serialization is a very exhausting thing. In the first half year, I was full of energy and ideas, and I could maintain the original idea and start a new book world. But after a long time, I will slowly enter a state of fatigue, and my thoughts will start to fly. It's like some characters in the book will take some detours, and sometimes I myself have entered this state without knowing it.

   During the writing of the book, I experienced many unexpected things, such as broken bones, additions to the family, closure of the community, and some other messes. However, during this period, I was affected by this and delayed the work itself. I feel very sad.

   makes me feel that this book is not so pure, and I can't match the characters and plot that this book should have.

Yesterday, I went back to the book friends' comments with some bold ideas, and let me start to examine the book "The Nomenclature of the Night". The characters and events in some chapters can be more delicate and delicate, but they are still there after the final writing. blemishes.

   Let’s look at some of the chapters in the second half. There is no structure to speak of, and no writing style to speak of.

   Sitting in front of the computer for seven hours today, full of thoughts, like an obsessive-compulsive sufferer who can’t accept toys that are not neatly placed, I can’t accept this book now.

  I don’t think a work that makes readers chasing joy should be like this. I hope I can be more responsible.

  So, I just communicated with the editor and the website and made a decision: stop the update and revise the text.

The    modification has three original intentions.

   The first is to want to modify some plots.

  For example: After Qingchen entered Li's Mid-Levels Manor, there should have been more stories.

  For example: Qingchen should have been dealt with more carefully after he became an inspector and was arrested.

  For example: The challenge of life and death on the Barents Sea should have been more flavorful.

  For example: Yesterday's last life-and-death challenge would feel too rushed when I think about it now.

   The second is to delete some irrelevant words to make the book look more streamlined, with less nonsense, and refine some rough chapters to make the text and plot more compact.

   The third is to delete some inexplicable and dispensable plots.

  Although I have decided to do this, I don’t want to decide how to stop and revise the text by myself.

   So, I would like to ask for your opinion here.

The first:

   I will open a new book of "Nomenclature of the Night (Condensed Edition, and I will send the revised content there one by one. The full text is free.

   But in this case, you may not be able to see the latest chapter for a period of time, and you can only continue reading after tying up.

  The second:

   I will revise the current original text, temporarily block unmodified chapters, and revise each chapter to put another chapter.

   so you can relive the world with me.

  The third type:

   I will try my best to pull back my existing thoughts, and write the ending according to the logic line and the world in the book. After the ending, I will open a new book "Night Nomenclature (Condensed Edition, the full text is free.

   In this way, the ending of subsequent writing may have some problems left over from the past.

   I know that you may choose different, I think, I will eventually choose a way to revise the article with the largest number of votes.

   But either option, I will do it as soon as possible without making you wait too long.

   During the revision period, some activities will be held regularly in the comment area to give you some benefits as apology compensation.

  I understand that this is a thankless task, but I am more worried that I will not have the impulse and energy to do such a thing in the future. Now I just hope that while I still have some blood, I can make this book better and make me feel less sorry.

   Posting this single chapter, I want to hear everyone's thoughts. Comments can reply to options: first/second/third. Thank you for your continued presence.